[BIO] Le Club Moderne. [Final]

[jackass]

After months of releasing a new alt, I am now in the middle of a brand new one and I thought I would release the final version of my 'Modern club' alt. It is the final of this 'area', but I am thinking of expanding it at some point. Hope you like it. (This is also one of my graphics for my portfolio).

[Sulai]

somethings are nice.

others are'nt.

[today]

Some of it doesnt match other parts (style) Pooltable wood has more detail compared to the pooltable top ect?

Some has detail other parts have nothing.

[jackass]

Everything has detail apart from the top of the walls? :S

I did actually add detail to it, but it didn't go at all.

And its all the same colour scheme, so I fail to see how it doesn't go?

[today]

The walls are all one colour
The laptop screen seems too smooth and doeskt go as well with blackoutline.
The pooltable if your having black lines on the top have it on the bottom (were the wood is too) doesnt look right to me without / half black half not.

The "bars" top seem too plain and flat.

Sorry but this must fail

Siz CLEARLY declared you no longer have permission to use his alts.

They should be removed or this isn't entirely yours.

[jackass]

Sorry but this must fail

Siz CLEARLY declared you no longer have permission to use his alts.

They should be removed or this isn't entirely yours.

I didn't use his alt, I used the layout of the computer which I changed. Also, he already gave me permission, and I already made the alt, so its too late for him to go back on his decision.

Anyway, thanks for your comments so far, It seems I might have to make another version after all.

It's good except for the computer which looks blatantly awful...

9/10 quite nice =]

[jackass]

It's good except for the computer which looks blatantly awful...

9/10 quite nice =]

Thanks for your slightly nicer comment.

[Nuka-Cola]

Nice alt i think it all goes and the lights are cool the beach seen thing is it a tv ??? dont quite get it but its and ace place and i would go there ( i LOVE the couches )


SIZ if you look has been banned on this forum he might come back as another name but he has been BANNED so even if he did say yes he cant go back on his decision cause he dont own an account on HxF