Omg this should be it
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Ok guys you decide if im done or not (Lido slide)
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AHMAGAZ
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Thats prety dammexcellent but the slides not connected to the top
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oopsy dazey rateing?
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AHMAGAZ
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Yer.Looks finished.Well done 100/100! I liek the girl
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tyvm its lynn i pushed her down slide >
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AHMAGAZ
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Many errors, some shading could be done, slide isnt joined, maybe more detail on grass and that grteen thing on the left side?
Shadows on chairs?
THe elgs on the person on the slide are strange. - Take a screenie of somone in shorts sitting down and go from there
Also the squares in the pool - the corners of them are wrong
I circled pixel errors
Slide shoulsd cast a shadow on the water?
Looks good though---
Originally Posted by Jackie Jack™
Yea i got it :] still idk i should be happy.. But after i signed papers.... It was parked in enterence way and i didnt know if he cared if i went out it or went out the exit... So i reveresed it a little bit and "BUMPED" the front of a mustang... Neither car had damage it was accident :rolleyes: but idk i still just feel really odd about hitting it
idk i like it but idk omg idk.....
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Thanks so many good point outs there im working them out now
you are kewl
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AHMAGAZ
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Oh and that hole in the ground. THere are errors around it so maybe you could just fill it and put a para in the back or something
EDIT: Ill get you that red para from the habbowood movies if you want?---
Originally Posted by Jackie Jack™
Yea i got it :] still idk i should be happy.. But after i signed papers.... It was parked in enterence way and i didnt know if he cared if i went out it or went out the exit... So i reveresed it a little bit and "BUMPED" the front of a mustang... Neither car had damage it was accident :rolleyes: but idk i still just feel really odd about hitting it idk i like it but idk omg idk.....
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I fixed the errors and added shadeing
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AHMAGAZ
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Thats very cool, when i saw it as a WIP i wasnt to sure about it (i think it was the portaloo tele which put me off), but you've proved me wrong and made an excellent alt. Congrats :-) 9/10 + rep
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