The Advocate Pub™

[orientalframe?]

Hahaha if it's the part I think you're talking about, then it's not a pillar, I think it's just a lodge wall in the background. :L It's only there to cover the tree background since I forgot to add a cabin tile to the part and really can't be bothered restacking. I'll be sure to give the cabin wood stones a try.

i have no idea what i was on about i'm sorry haha i meant the rainbow on the cabin stones

[Semple]

Since pretty the main criticism was the stairway, I've just decided to remove it. Hopefully it looks a little better now:


Added toner to the outdoors too, and removed the random rainbow.

[Empired]

I much prefer the second design of the pub because the marble + brown tiles did look odd. But stacking tiles means that everything overlaps them so it was probably best to just remove it completely.

Although I do like the rooms, I find the inside and the outside to be a bit cluttered and OTT. In this case, I think less would be more. I really like the outside of the actual pub building but it really doesn't look like it's meant to be a pub If you designed it for something else, though, that's fine. I'm not a huge fan of the marble tiles next to the roads 'cause the colours are complete opposites. I'm also not sure about the random three pet pillows outside? Are they for the pets you have in the room?
Also, I do like the benches outside but I think park benches (the brown ones which you can have snow on) would look better than lodge.

I like the inside a lot The only bit I'm not too keen on is the way the lodge bars + corners finish above the walls on the actual bar bit (if that makes sense?) It just looks a little odd, although I'm not really sure how you could fix it to be honest

Er I really like your second designs of the room though so I'll +rep them

[Semple]

I much prefer the second design of the pub because the marble + brown tiles did look odd. But stacking tiles means that everything overlaps them so it was probably best to just remove it completely.

Although I do like the rooms, I find the inside and the outside to be a bit cluttered and OTT. In this case, I think less would be more. I really like the outside of the actual pub building but it really doesn't look like it's meant to be a pub If you designed it for something else, though, that's fine. I'm not a huge fan of the marble tiles next to the roads 'cause the colours are complete opposites. I'm also not sure about the random three pet pillows outside? Are they for the pets you have in the room?
Also, I do like the benches outside but I think park benches (the brown ones which you can have snow on) would look better than lodge.

I like the inside a lot The only bit I'm not too keen on is the way the lodge bars + corners finish above the walls on the actual bar bit (if that makes sense?) It just looks a little odd, although I'm not really sure how you could fix it to be honest

Er I really like your second designs of the room though so I'll +rep them

Thanks a lot for the crit, much appreciated.

Yeah I agree on the first point haha, my pet hate are rooms that are too bare, so I guess I have a tendency to overcompensate. :p Mmm okay, I see what you mean about the marble tiles, I just don't know what I could replace them with. With regards to the benches, I figured there was a sufficient amount of yellow in the room that they wouldn't look too of place, I'll definitely give the other benches a shot though. And yeah, the dogs beds are for the 3 terriers in the room.

Never really noticed that in regards to the bar area - if I had the top lodge dividers on level with the walls though, the gap between the two sets of dividers would be really narrow, if you get me? Not sure it's worth changing.

Thanks again.

[Samantha]

I really like the top room, I think it's the way it contrasts in elegant and cheaper furni. Not sure about the other room ad I haven't seen one like that in a while .

[Semple]

Redesigned the outside. Basically simplified it a little and made it less cluttered - hopefully it looks more pub-like now.