HabboConsoleFM [V1]

[Brice]

dis website real ugly

---------- Post added 10-04-2013 at 01:54 AM ----------

it dnt even have djs

[peteyt]

Not keen on the website design or the actual name. Design wise, it's too much text, needs more images to break it up. There's nice and simple and sleek and then there's too simple and boring and sadly I find that it falls into the too simple/boring category (don't mean to offend).

Name wise, it's a pet hate of mine really to call an online radio station something FM, as fm is obviously broadcast via the FM frequency. I know lots do it though so don't worry your not the only one ha.

[lawrawrrr]

There's definitely a ton more grammar and sentence-structuring mistakes in the first paragraph, missing punctuation, needless repetition and really needs a design edit in a major major way (this is all from a text perspective). It kind of physically hurts me to read it! Congratulations on no spelling mistakes mind you.


Seriously just under 'Recruitment'

HabboConsoleFM is now looking for some new Radio Broadcasting talent so, If you think you have what it takes to drop the right beat and keep your fellow Habbo's entertained. Then here is your chance to prove it

should be

HabboConsoleFM is now looking for some new Radio Broadcasting talent so, if you think you have what it takes to drop the right beat and keep your fellow Habbos entertained, then here is your change to prove it

That's like the worst part I picked up on anyway. I'm not going to sit here and rewrite your site for free!

The design of the main page is just... really bland... like, nothing seems to fit, there's no text continuity, no graphics (ok you haven't got graphics designers but this genuinely looks like a bare test page) and even silly things like alignment don't fit. Neither does it even slightly correspond with the forum theme. I get that it's meant to be simple, sleek like the above poster said but it's kind of not working.


Good luck with it, I guess...

[Rachel]

Yes well 1 of the owners is Logan Dyer and I use to be forum manager there to put on their feet and decided to step down and give a chance to someone else

Good luck though

There's definitely a ton more grammar and sentence-structuring mistakes in the first paragraph, missing punctuation, needless repetition and really needs a design edit in a major major way (this is all from a text perspective). It kind of physically hurts me to read it! Congratulations on no spelling mistakes mind you.


Seriously just under 'Recruitment'

HabboConsoleFM is now looking for some new Radio Broadcasting talent so, If you think you have what it takes to drop the right beat and keep your fellow Habbo's entertained. Then here is your chance to prove it

should be

HabboConsoleFM is now looking for some new Radio Broadcasting talent so, if you think you have what it takes to drop the right beat and keep your fellow Habbos entertained, then here is your change to prove it

You made a mistake there

[beth]

Logan dyer... christ. that'll be some quality DJing then....

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[AgnesIO]

Logan dyer... christ. that'll be some quality DJing then....

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I take it he isn't very good? :L

[HabboConsoleFM]

Thank you for all of the improvements and comments so far. They have helped us so much!

I have updated the homepage, and will be updating the other pages as the day goes on. We have more graphics, bigger text, clearer font and checked all our grammar and punctuation!

If you have anymore improvements, are signing up, leave below your comments.

[iLogan]

woah woah who is ilogan i don't work there

[AgnesIO]

woah woah who is ilogan i don't work there

I guess someone could choose the same username as you?

But controversial haha

[iLogan]

I guess someone could choose the same username as you?

But controversial haha

oh it's @Logandyer45; ... good luck with the site guys! The front page looks 4 years old though and if one of the largest, well known fansites (habbox) is having trouble with activity I'm not sure you'll go very far! Good luck nonetheless