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    Default Turnip Poem (help + rep)

    I started writing this about a turnip just a while ago its for my english

    I stumped into the market
    One horrible wainy day
    When all at once i saw a sight
    that took my breath away

    A holy being from above
    The orbs of red and cream
    And as powerfull as a king

    They sat there like a hammer
    Ready to be thrown!
    But i know i can not chuck them
    For the Lord may turn me into stone


    Ok Thats just a ruff idea of what i want i also need atleast one more paragraph... has to make turnips out to be AMAZING! for the next paragraph i was thinknig of telling the reader what it was cause you dont no its a turnip yet...

    ANy thing you can help me change? like that king bit or help me with the last paragragh...

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    tbh I am crap at poems but I can spot a good poem from 1001 miles away and this person certainly caught my eye, tbh this is probs not the best answer u wanted but it is wicked
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    Woops i missed out a line in the second paragraph ;[

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    I stumped into the market
    One horrible rainy day
    When all at once i saw a sight
    that took my breath away

    A holy being from above
    The orbs of red and cream
    It caught my eye as i walked on by
    And as powerfull as a king

    They sat there like a hammer
    Ready to be thrown!
    But i know i can not chuck them
    For the Lord may turn me to stone

    This poems nearly at an end,
    Can you guess what it is?
    That was on a stall one rainy day,
    Inspiring me to write this,

    haha, that sucks
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    Lock it, fill it, call it, find it,
    View it, code it, jam, unlock it,
    Surf it, scroll it, pause it, click it,
    Cross it, crack it, switch, update it,
    Name it, read it, tune it, print it,
    Scan it, send it, fax, rename it,
    Touch it, bring it, pay it, watch it,
    Turn it, leave it, start, format it.

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    Lol thanks i may use bits of that you so kind ofr that! if any one else wants to have a go it woould be great andi can put em all together and change it a bit + rep to you

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