Almost finished lido slide *wip*

[Dudeitsme]

here i messed up a little but what the heck

[.Lynn]

I think you should keep the other one.

[Dudeitsme]

yeah ill keep the other one

[AndieJohanny]

I'm not sure why, but the bottom of the slide looks a bit awkward, maybe it's because you haven't shown where the corner of the wall is... I dunno, the perspective is a bit off or something... Anyway, there are a few errors, but the shading of the slide is pretty good, although you could put a bit more on the side edges of it and the bottom... Oh! I just noticed! At the bottom, you made it look like the water hits the very edge of the slide, which it doesn't usually... Most of the time the slide ends like a foot above the water and then you slide off and into it, but you've made it look like the water is literally right underneath and right at the edge of the slide. Overall 7/10, good but needs work I think

[Dudeitsme]

Thank you very much and i will get to the parts whhere you have explained those were good points

[iAdam]

i still spy pixel errors

[JT-Fan]

Rly good but make it mroe "kiddy"

[q25]

i never get to see ur picture

[q25]

*dies in horrible pain*