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Kardan
29-12-2004, 07:22 PM
The alarm rang. Dionysus got out of bed. He got dressed and had a wash. The next second he was at work.
"Like the decorations" Callie said. She had just finished putting them up.
"Don't you think it's a bit late..." Said Jay who was typing away.
"No, It's only the 19th" Calie said.
Callie was a whole week behind!
"Anyway... I need to go on habbo" Callie exclamied
"Why?" Said Impetuous who came from no where
"I need to sell my snowglobe" Said Callie as she logged in
"I need to sell it... Before we release it..." She continued
"Callie... Have you checked the catalogue lately..." Jay said
"What... Not... The Snowglobe" Cried Callie.
She ran out of the office crying.
All of this girl talk had made Dionysus even more moody.
"Mmmmm...Grrrrr" Dionysus said as he sipped on some blue juice.
"What's wrong with him..." Impetuous said.
"Don't ask me..." Said Jay as she fiddled with Callie's account
"Anyway... As you may not of noticed it was christmas yesterday..." Impetuous called out. "What did you lot get"
For the first time Dionysus spoke.
"I know" he said in a calm voice
"I got some socks" said Jay. "I gave them to the cat"
"I KNOW!" said Dionysus his vocie getting louder
"Well i got..." Impetuous got interupted by a beeping sound"
"A meesage on Callie's console" Said Jay as she clicked on 1 new message(s)

The room was in a deep silence
Impetuous walked over to the screen. Dionysus finally got out of his chair and looked over Jay and Impetuous.
"We have a problem..." Jay read out.
"What problem?" Said Impetuous
"No idiot that's what it says, It's from Moderator" She replied
"According to this" Dionysus held a piece of paper to the light. "Entmadien is ont Moderator's account"
"I'll reply" Said Jay
Impetuous read what she typed... "What is the problem... Please tele... You put an E not a T... Tell us" She said
The room was in silence. They got a new message
"The Snowglobes has been stolen" Impetuous said reading from the message.
"OK! Move out of the way Jay... I'm in charge..." Dionysus said as he shoved Jay off the chair.
"Ok... Entmadien do you know who it is..." Impetuous read out from Dionysus' message.
"It's a bit obvious though who it is..." Said Jay as he sent the message
"WHO?!" Shouted Dionysus
"Think about it..." Replied Jay
They thought about it
"Callie!" They all said.

The doors burst open.
"What... I thought he was..." Said Impetuous
"In Miami i know... What's he doing back?" Interupted Jay
"Look what he has!" Exclamied Dionysus

At the doorway was a samll figure. It was smash. He had a tan from Miami. But the most important thing was the snowglobe in his hand.

He was still standing at the doorway.
"Smash... Be a good boy and come here..." Said Dionysus
He took a step back
"He's 23 for crying out loud. Get here!" Shouted Jay
He took two more steps back
"Smash... Don't go any further..." Said Impetuous
He did. He fell down the stairs.
Becs walked into the room with the snowglobe which she caught.
"Stop playing!" She shouted. "Revive Smash and get back to work!" She continued.
She put the Snowglobe on Dionysus' desk.

Dionysus rushed down the stairs.
"Jay... You get the interview room ready..." He said acting like the leader.
"I will revive Smash..." he continued
"And me..." Said Impetuous
"Find Callie"

Later in the interview room

"DID YOU STEAL THOSE SNOWGLOBES" Shouted Dionysus
A tear came from Smash
"Don't you think you're being too harsh" Jay whispered
"No.. I am..." He paused.
A tearful Callie was standing at the door.
Dionysus grabbed Callie and shoved her inside the room. Impetuous watched through the window.
"WHO STOLE THE SNOWGLOBES?" Dionysus continued.
"Not me" Callie and Smash said together.
"Call Ione" Dionysus said to Jay
Jay got her mobile out and typed in a 15 digit number.
"Pass it" Dionysus said as he snatched the mobile.
"Hello... Yes... I know... You know... Great... The whole hotel knows?! Great... Yes... We got two... Over here now... Youre where... Who long... Ok... We can keep them... Bring out... No... We can't..." Dionysus got interupted.
"Wait a second" He said to Ione over the phone.
Impetuous was taping at the window. She was pointing where the Snowglobe was.
It was gone.
"IONE! GET HERE NOW! THE LAST SNOWGLOBE IS GONE!" Dionysus put the phone down.
"Jay... You stay there... Me and Impetuous... Are going to find the criminal" He said.
"Well it can't be these two there were here" Siad Jay
"Whatever" Dionysus said as he walked away with Impetuous
"Told you" Callie and Smash said together.

Dionysus went to his desk. There were footprints. They folowed them. They lead to the computer. Still logged onto Callie's account. Whoever went on it had delted every single snowglobe on habbo. They had the last one.

The doorbell rang. Jay took Smash and Callie by ahdn to the door of the Offices. There was a figure. In red with Blonde hair. Standing by the figure with a red coat with brown hair. Callie gulped.


"Wa..." Jay was sppechless
"Ok, I came back..." Said a voice
"Anyway... What's going on..." Said the other person.
"Oh... So you are the hotel manager" Said the first voice
"Yes... Where's Dionysus" Said the second voice
"Ione... Dionysus is in the offices" Jay said... Still looking speechless.
Ione walked in.
"Well... Welcome back Jibbi..." Said Jay trying to keep calm.
"IT IS HER!" Shouted Callie who got out of Jay's grip and ran for her life.
"Just let me in" Said Jibbi, Her eyes were getting a more "Evil" look.
"Wait..." Said Jay.
She closed the doors and turned to Smash.
"Should we let her in" Jay whispered
"No... Don't be a fool... Why would she just suddenly appear from coming to Peru?" Said Smash
"What?" Said Jay confused
"It would take her ages to get back to the UK from Peru. Plus this only hapened 3 hours ago! She wouldn't of know about this... Unless!" Smash stopped.

There was just blackness. Smash could here a voice mumbling. He tried to talk... But he couldn't. He was sitting on a chair. He was alive. Just couldn't move or speak.

Meanwhile

"Ok... Hello Ione..." Said Dionysus
"Hi" She said as they followed the footprints.
"Look... This does look a bit wierd..." Said Impetuous.
"What does" Dionysus said.
"The person who stole the snowglobes is waring high heels look" Impetuous said as she pointed to the footprints.
"Good fashion sense" Said Ione.
"We better call the Tech team in" Said Dionysus

They know knew that whoever stole them was Female.

Meanwhile on the building across the road from the offices...

Smash still couldn't talk. He couldn't breathe that good either. He heard a phone ring. Someone picked it up.
"Hello..." They said.
Smash tried to scream. He couldn't...
"Ok... I'll send them over... Yes... You can be in charge of them..." The person said.

Anyways away from the story.... If you gather up all this evidence you'll be lead to two suspects. If not you might want to read it all again.

Back to the offices

"The tech team are coming over" Dionysus said
"And i'm in charge" He acted though he knew everything once again.
"Wait a minute..." Ione said... She pondered
"What?" Said Impetuous
"Where's Jay... With Callie and Smash?
"I don't know..." Dionysus said... "Impetuous go and find them" he continued.
So she did.

The Tech team rushed in.
"Hello Imp" Said Glitterkat
The rest of the tech team went in.
"Hello" Said Impetuous
Giltterkat walked on. But turned back...
"HELP!" Shouted Impetuous

"Sorry, I had to take care of something..." Glitterkat said as she straignted her hair
"Ok, Tech team" Dionysus said.
Everyone listened
"I want you to get every female and line them up at that wall" He ordered
"What?" Said Glitterkat

Impetuous was slammed into a room. She turned back to see who captured her but the door was already shut. She saw two otherpeople in the room. Jay and smash.
"Wait up guys..." Impetuous said as she untied Jay
"mmmmmm" Smash mumbled. They were each tied to a chair with tape over there mouths.
"Finally..." Jay said as Impetuous untied her.
"Oh my... God" Jay said as she opened her eyes...
"I know" said Impetuous. "Let me untie Smash" she said.
"How... Is this possible" Jay said as she looked around the room.

"Ok..." Dionysus said. "We got: Becs..."
"Let go off me" Becs shouted
"Ione"
"It wasn't me..." Ione called out
"Glitterkat"
"Why do you think it's me..."
"Callie"
"IT ISN'T ME" She shouted.
"So..." Dionysus said... Who has high heels...
Glitterkat did
"Well... It was glitterkat" Dionysus said
"No..."
"Send her to the dungeon..." He called
"We haven't got a dungeon..." O ne of the tech team members said
"Send her to the roof then" He ordered.

Off they went.

"Oh my..." Smash said
"I know...." Impetuous said
There were millions of snowglobes in the room.
"Well whoever did this... Stoe the snowglobes..." Impetuous said.
She turned to the other two...
"Well.... We was going to let Jibbi in, then someone grabbed us from behind" Jay said.
"So it's office staff" Impetuous said.
"We need to get out of here" Smash said.

"IT WASN'T ME!" Glitterkat shouted as she looked over London.
"What's that" One of the tech team members said.
"What's what?" Said the other one.
"That..." Said the first one
"It's... Jay..." Glitterkat said as she pointed to a building.
"It's Jay... WITH THE SNOWGLOBES!" She shouted.
The alarm went off.
"What?!" said Dionysus as he rushed to the roof
"The... SNOWGLOBES!" Glitterkat shouted as she pointed to Impetuous, Jay and Smash banging at a door.
"Come on...." Dionysus said.

"There here..." Said Impetuous
Dionysus broke down the door
"We found the snowglobes..." Impetuous said
"We think we know who it is..." Smash said
"Follow..." Jay called out

So Dionysus followed. But Glitterkat never went to the building. She ran off. Running like hell...

"THERE!" Pointed Jay
A female of the age of 25 was standing there*
"But... She..." Dionysus was speechless
"I never knew she was back" he continued.
"Don't worry there's more..." Smash said.
"HER!" Said a female voice**
"Well... You figured it out" Said another female voice***

* Person 1
** Person 2
*** Person 3

Who was the first preson?
Who was the second person that captured the 3rd person.
Who was the 3rd preson.

CLUE: Persons 1 and 3 were the partners in crime.

PM me the first one to get the two culprits wins.

Zylo
30-12-2004, 05:25 PM
Cool story bro.. Make another one. Or just tell me one.

Kardan
31-12-2004, 11:19 AM
None really seems to be bothered i only got 2 pms and 1 person ahs got it correct.

Michael.
31-12-2004, 01:16 PM
Its good! I thought it was great! I'd buy one of your books (If you made one :|)!

Kardan
31-12-2004, 01:19 PM
Yay! I got a new rep...

Oh erm yeah i am writing stroies about They Return.

It's a bit like harry potter he has 7 yrs so there's 7 books

Same w/ mine. There's about 6 books. But it's not magical.

So watch out...... If you see a book called They Return it was mde by me!"

Pulchritudinous
31-12-2004, 01:24 PM
Jees, sorry the first bit sounded good, but I wouldn't have been able it read it all, I'll take their word for it, IT'S BLOODY GREAT!

Kardan
31-12-2004, 01:25 PM
Quite long thouhg that could be a problem!

Adzeh
03-01-2005, 10:56 PM
as if im going to read all that, make into an animation lol.

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