HELP = +REP

[.MiniDan.]

Please help me with this:
I need a 8 stanza poem but has to be about love and the second and fourth line of each stanza has to rhym

Nixt (Forum Moderator) Thread closed to prevent further arguments.

[FlyingJesus]

Do you mean you need to write one or find one?

[Charlie]

I think he needs to write one, if so, you need to do that yourself as we can't help much.

[.MiniDan.]

it has to be of 34 stanzas im missing 8

and i have to right not find

[Mrs.McCall]

How did we meet like this
Isn't it funny how we met
Nothing was ever the same
Meeting you I won't regret

Sometimes I wonder what if
What if I never let you in my heart
And then I just realise
We were meant to be from the start

And I finally know the truth
We were meant to be together
I can smile as I know
We will be together forever

I hold you in my arms
The sweet smell of your hair
I love how, when I am near you
Love is in the air

Your my one true love
The only one for me
And I love you with all my heart
And I hope that you can see

Now we hold hands
My stomach aches with love
The world stops just for us
We're a blessing from above

I can't think of any more soz

[.MiniDan.]

:D thanks alot +rep

[Ostinato]

Whats the point in asking us to write it for you? When it comes down to it on the day of your exam, you can't log on here and ask Ms.McCall to give you the answers I'm afraid.

You'll only get find out and get yourself into bother. You've no idea how obvious it is to teachers when they see people that have obviously plagourised their work, and can easily compare it to other stuff you have done.

[.MiniDan.]

well, new teacher, and is not exam, is just an a work for extra points k? and i just missing 8 stanzas big deal! and like in many post mods edit and gives infractions

dont post pointless or out of the theme

Edited by Zlixi (Forum Moderator) ~ Please do not Post telling other members they have broken the rules.

[.MiniDan.]

Thanks man, i got a 9.7 XD, yea she did not wanted to put 10, wat a &/) xD but thank you, my 34 stanzas were perfect. :D

[Jõnathan]

Next time, do it yourself.
And it can't have been perfect if you got 9.7.
It would have been like 8 without Mrs.McCall's interference.

[Ostinato]

Ecscuse me, I did not in any way at all post pointlessly, nor off topic.

I simpl posted in relation to your original post, informing you that there is no point in asking for help with this sort of thing as it's obvious when you cheat, and wont benefit you at all in the long run. The idea of this forum is to get help with your homework, not for people to do it for you.

Well, it's good that you got a good mark - but both you and all users who read this thread no you didn't actually deserve it as it wasn't exactly all your own work.

[.MiniDan.]

the mod and
Next time, do it yourself.
And it can't have been perfect if you got 9.7.
It would have been like 8 without Mrs.McCall's interference.

go to ur own bussiness

[:Hazel]

Lol, nice poem which you didn't write. :rolleyes:

Go copy and paste one off the net next time instead. ;)

[.MiniDan.]

good for u, do it ur self okey? and stop it -.- mature

[DannyyTBH.]

bit long but o well

I Don’t Want to Love You, But I Do

You were born out of death to a life in a cage
Where bombs are not the only reason people die
Fed by the violence of hunger and homelessness
Raised by colonialism
Your heart and your will still grew strong

You scare me
Not just because they tell me to be scared
Not just because they repeat, repeat, repeat
The story of 1983
Begging me to understand
Americans are worth more than Lebanese

Why do they never tell me about Jihad al Bina
That you have created so much
Saved so many lives
Improved so many more

It scares me
When I admit to myself
That I would be more scared without you
If I still took the time to see

To see the violence that does not just fall from the skies
that exists in hunger and homelessness
in colonialism

It scares me
That my hope is tangled up
In actions I would never want to commit

But I don’t sleep much these days
And I’ve tried hard
But I haven’t found
Anything
to give me hope that they will listen

They repeat, repeat, repeat
The story of Gaza withdrawal
Hoping we won’t see
The violence that continues
That kills in so many ways
Hoping we will now support it
Or at least stop looking

They insist talk does not work
When there is no one to talk to
It is hard to find an interlocutor
When you’re not willing to listen
To see
To feel

How do you keep faith that talk will work
When even they are insisting it won’t?

I am learning to have hope in you
I am learning to see you as so much more
Than those actions I would never want to commit

You amaze me.
Born out of death to a life in a cage
Raised by colonialism
You did not accept imprisonment as natural
You did not accept hunger as justice
You did not accept
the ceaseless killing in so many ways
Of those next to you
Or those farther away

I love you
But I will never be yours
I don’t want you inside me
You are too male for me

And I cannot, gratefully, fully silence the voice that insists:
Some deaths you did accept
Including of some who were listening

That is why the full statement that the question-marks pry me with reads:
It is sad, but I’m learning to have hope in Hizbulla

Maybe it is the naivety
of one whose life has never been directly threatened
I still believe:
Be the change you want to see in the world.

[Albion]

bit long but o well

I Don’t Want to Love You, But I Do

You were born out of death to a life in a cage
Where bombs are not the only reason people die
Fed by the violence of hunger and homelessness
Raised by colonialism
Your heart and your will still grew strong

You scare me
Not just because they tell me to be scared
Not just because they repeat, repeat, repeat
The story of 1983
Begging me to understand
Americans are worth more than Lebanese

Why do they never tell me about Jihad al Bina
That you have created so much
Saved so many lives
Improved so many more

It scares me
When I admit to myself
That I would be more scared without you
If I still took the time to see

To see the violence that does not just fall from the skies
that exists in hunger and homelessness
in colonialism

It scares me
That my hope is tangled up
In actions I would never want to commit

But I don’t sleep much these days
And I’ve tried hard
But I haven’t found
Anything
to give me hope that they will listen

They repeat, repeat, repeat
The story of Gaza withdrawal
Hoping we won’t see
The violence that continues
That kills in so many ways
Hoping we will now support it
Or at least stop looking

They insist talk does not work
When there is no one to talk to
It is hard to find an interlocutor
When you’re not willing to listen
To see
To feel

How do you keep faith that talk will work
When even they are insisting it won’t?

I am learning to have hope in you
I am learning to see you as so much more
Than those actions I would never want to commit

You amaze me.
Born out of death to a life in a cage
Raised by colonialism
You did not accept imprisonment as natural
You did not accept hunger as justice
You did not accept
the ceaseless killing in so many ways
Of those next to you
Or those farther away

I love you
But I will never be yours
I don’t want you inside me
You are too male for me

And I cannot, gratefully, fully silence the voice that insists:
Some deaths you did accept
Including of some who were listening

That is why the full statement that the question-marks pry me with reads:
It is sad, but I’m learning to have hope in Hizbulla

Maybe it is the naivety
of one whose life has never been directly threatened
I still believe:
Be the change you want to see in the world.


A bit late there, she has already handed in Mrs. McCalls Homework and had it marked.