Original Writing

[brandon]

Hi, im writing about a neglected dog who gets ditched in a diffrent town to where he was living, what else can happen to the dog in my story?

Please keep it relatively clean and interesting, + rep to good ideas i can use.

Thanks

[iJoe]

sorry cant help, must be original to you, lol nah am crap at this lol gd luck have fun

[Ramones]

Loloz are you writing it from the dog's point of view or somebody talking about a dog

[brandon]

Someone talking bout the dog

ive introduced dog - description etc
then went into past about neglective owner and dumped into a random town

now im stuck :L


If you have a better idea for a story id listen, although would need more details,
Thanks for help so far tho

[Jackk]

like someone elese in the town where he is lost could think that the dog is theirs and take it to their house and the dog can escape. and then a talking mouse comes into it and helps the dog escape cos the mouse has special powers n shizz.

[Sly]

ir runs down a 30 mph road and gets hit, it has some cuts and it breaths slow, it later dies. :rolleyes:

[brandon]

ir runs down a 30 mph road and gets hit, it has some cuts and it breaths slow, it later dies. :rolleyes:

You're harsh man, you know full well some girl was proper upset bout that earlier gotta admit was kinda funny but proper harsh

[clarissa !!]

what more can you say about a bloody abandoned dog?

[Sly]

You're harsh man, you know full well some girl was proper upset bout that earlier gotta admit was kinda funny but proper harsh

you seriously believe kyle? one of his pets dies once a week.

[brandon]

you seriously believe kyle? one of his pets dies once a week.

Oh lol didnt realise it was that guy saying it, thought was some girl who actually cared about the dog, fair nuf then kyle is a fool.

And to libertine i dunno thats why im asking ::O:rolleyes:

[Ashhizzle]

The dog got taken in by RSPCA the end.

[Energizer]

some little kid finds it and hides it, then their parents find out and throw it out on the streets & it makes friends with some other dogs, and they like get aggresive n stuff, and chase other cats and dogs out of town. idk.

[velocity]

just use like, proper powerful emotional words.

[brandon]

+ rep to all helpful replies so far, thanks alot =)

[Davii]

make it like that film, oliver i think it was where there was that ginger cat that got abandoned and made friends with loads of dogs and there was that man that looked after em all and they was all stray dogs and he had a motorbike thing and it was well good. and the dog trappers were all like trying a catch em but they escaped and i think that bit is from lady and the tramp.

[dirrty]

ur dog finds another dog and falls in love with it. then other dog leaves ur dog for another dog.

[brandon]

Ty dirrty and Lemon, im off now but replies are greatly appreciated

[Ramones]

the dog saves an 83 year old womans life and then becomes a police dog!

[brandon]

the dog saves an 83 year old womans life and then becomes a police dog!

Lol that could be a good ending actually, that he becomes a police dog...

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