A Newcastle Poem

[EverSteve]

I decided to try and write a poem for the Newcastle Fans, I aint yet done but would like your feedback :eusa_clap



King Kev is back they said
A reincarnated dream
But that was soon dead
The light only gleamed

Captain's arm band given to Owen
It was a bit sudden
Newcastle's relegated he'll soon be goin'
Doubt he'll have any more trips to London

Smith relegated twice
Leeds and toon
His future? Roll the dice
As soon as he joined, it was doom

Ashley wants 100 Million
10 pounds he got, from a manager in the Pertelee Sunday League
Ashley couldn't even afford a pavilion
The toon fans, full of fatigue

Alan Shearer
Brought in to save the club
Only made the fall dearer
Now he's off to the pub

Oh well, Leeds will soon await
A year or two to fall again
It's a date!
Ashley may as well sell it off on Dragon's Den

[Geraint]

I think it's crap.

[Immenseman]

doesn't sound very good. i get what you're trying to say but yeah doesn't flow

[Wootzeh]

it's crap.

[brandon]

Sorry I hate to be critical but it kinda has no rhythm to it what so ever. :(

[Wolverhampton]

sucks ass tbf.

[Jack.Lfc]

I think it's crap.


doesn't sound very good. i get what you're trying to say but yeah doesn't flow


it's crap.


Sorry I hate to be critical but it kinda has no rhythm to it what so ever. :(


sucks ass tbf.

HE AINT YET DONE GOD.

Anyway needs improvents, good effort tho.

[luce]

No beat to it but atleast you ain't done yet :)

[Wolverhampton]

Oh crap I didn't know he wrote it himself, serves me rite for not reading the thread!!

Sorry, yeah, It could be better with a few improvements! ;)

[Rock]

Good effort but needs improvement

[Geraint]

Oh crap I didn't know he wrote it himself, serves me rite for not reading the thread!!

Sorry, yeah, It could be better with a few improvements! ;)

Quite frankly, I couldn't care who wrote it, it's crap.

[Wolverhampton]

Yeah it is but no need to be as harsh, god you make me laugh, you don't give a **** do you. :P

[Geraint]

Yeah it is but no need to be as harsh, god you make me laugh, you don't give a **** do you. :P

Honesty is the best policy.

[Wolverhampton]

It must be something in the water down their in Wales, all the Welsh speak their mind. :P

[Geraint]

We're just fighters. If you want to go against what I said then I'm more than happy to have a fight with anyone on this forum. It's in the genes. :P

[Wolverhampton]

Wolves lads have already had a few run ins with you crazy *******s. :P

[Wolves]

Good poem really.

[Rock]

Oh hello Wolves nice to see you posting here for the first time :)

Anyway are you making a new one/improve with a bit more rhythm, Steve?

[Wolves]

I think you're on to something my friend! ;)

[Rock]

I think you're on to something my friend! ;)

Oh I am :)

I pulled the first string and now beginning to unravel everything!

Im such a genius :D