Alex3213
25-02-2010, 05:06 PM
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Now, seeing as I am a News Reporter, I think this is very poor for me! I seem to have made 5 mistakes but Mister Griffin won't tell me where they are! I was wondering if you could do the work for me and PM HabboxComps with the 5 mistakes. You don't have to write what they should be, just show where they are wrong or not.
Hiya Bob,
I lve talkin' to you, you're one of a kind. I wish I spoke to you more often,maybe we could see each other once a weak or something! I know it is short but it is sweet. Speak to u soon.
Lots of love,
Alex.
I thought I was alright at English but evidently not. Good luck :).
1st Prize: 1 HC Sofa + 20 rep
Now, seeing as I am a News Reporter, I think this is very poor for me! I seem to have made 5 mistakes but Mister Griffin won't tell me where they are! I was wondering if you could do the work for me and PM HabboxComps with the 5 mistakes. You don't have to write what they should be, just show where they are wrong or not.
Hiya Bob,
I lve talkin' to you, you're one of a kind. I wish I spoke to you more often,maybe we could see each other once a weak or something! I know it is short but it is sweet. Speak to u soon.
Lots of love,
Alex.
I thought I was alright at English but evidently not. Good luck :).
1st Prize: 1 HC Sofa + 20 rep