Phil
29-01-2011, 11:42 PM
http://www.habbofansite.net/fontgen/index.php?text=spaghetti hoops&style=16
SPAG is a very important thing when it comes to writing competitions and it has to be spot on or Mike and Alex will be on your back. SPAG is a thing I seem to lack..... a lot. For those of you who don't know, SPAG stands for; Spelling Punctuation and Grammar.
Below is an extract of something I wrote for my English assignment. Within it there are four SPAG errors. I want you to correct the errors in the passage below. PM HabboxComps (http://www.habboxforum.com/private.php?do=newpm&u=66405) with the corrected version of this passage:
The air was frightengly cold, and for all the tightly closed windows it penetrated the interior of the coach. The leather seats felt damp to the hands.there must have been a small crack in the roof, because now and again little drips of rain fell softly through, smudging the leather and leaving a dark-blue stain like a splodge of ink. The wind came in gusts, at times shaking the coach as it travelled round the bend of the road, and in the exposed places on the high ground it blew with such force that the hole coach shaked, rocking between the high wheels like a drunken man.
Prize: 5 credits + 10 rep
(kindly donated by Wiizzz)
Please note if you're a clever smarty pants and find more than 5, just put them all down. You won't be penalised. Likewise, those who only find 5 will not be penalised for finding less than others. - Inseriousity. (Competitions Manager)
SPAG is a very important thing when it comes to writing competitions and it has to be spot on or Mike and Alex will be on your back. SPAG is a thing I seem to lack..... a lot. For those of you who don't know, SPAG stands for; Spelling Punctuation and Grammar.
Below is an extract of something I wrote for my English assignment. Within it there are four SPAG errors. I want you to correct the errors in the passage below. PM HabboxComps (http://www.habboxforum.com/private.php?do=newpm&u=66405) with the corrected version of this passage:
The air was frightengly cold, and for all the tightly closed windows it penetrated the interior of the coach. The leather seats felt damp to the hands.there must have been a small crack in the roof, because now and again little drips of rain fell softly through, smudging the leather and leaving a dark-blue stain like a splodge of ink. The wind came in gusts, at times shaking the coach as it travelled round the bend of the road, and in the exposed places on the high ground it blew with such force that the hole coach shaked, rocking between the high wheels like a drunken man.
Prize: 5 credits + 10 rep
(kindly donated by Wiizzz)
Please note if you're a clever smarty pants and find more than 5, just put them all down. You won't be penalised. Likewise, those who only find 5 will not be penalised for finding less than others. - Inseriousity. (Competitions Manager)