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Samantha
06-06-2012, 06:01 PM
http://Habbox.com/text/113/The+Plot%20Ending

The other day I went on this amazing plot generator, it allowed you to put your own characters in and basically create the plot yourself. After you did that it then added words in appropriately and created the story. The weird and wonderful plots it created were cool and although some errors were made it was funny and gave me an idea. Below is a plot I've created, I want you to finish it off but you must include the words I have given below somewhere in the ending! It can be as long as you want.

The spookiest will win.

1. Orange
2. Koala
3. Moon


There's a loving new girl in West Boggins and she has everybody talking. Stunningly slender and devastatingly hot, all the boys want her. However, Alison Smith has a secret - she's a cowardly vampire.

Brad Parkes is a delightful, thin boy who enjoys socialising. He becomes fascinated by Alison who can stop cars with her bare hands. He doesn't understand why she's so standoffish.

His bestfriend, a smart troll called Gary, helps Brad begin to piece together the puzzle. Together, they discover the ultimate weapon - the blue, tattered spoon...


Good luck!

Prize: 5 credits + 10 rep

Munex
14-06-2012, 07:57 AM
Gary was astonished, he simply couldn't believe what they had stumbled upon. He swiftly explained to Brad in an exasperated stutter about the legend of the blue, tattered spoon - a legend that claims whoever rubs the blue, tattered spoon upon a new moon shall be met by an all-powerful genie that will grant any wish.

Gary was a smart troll and happened to be a keen astronomer; Gary knew that the next new moon was actually the very night they found the blue, tattered spoon, but he grew envious of confident Brad and kept this knowledge to himself. The cunning troll held onto the spoon to keep it "safe", but later that night, Gary gave the blue, tattered spoon a long and loving caress...

The spoon began to shake and wobble as the sky turned to a burnt-orange and the ground began to quake as if sinister beasts were clawing their way up from a fiery underworld. Smoke oozed out out the blue, tattered spoon - Gary's eyes glistened in a terror-filled awe. And in a sudden burst of cloud, there shimmered the Koala-genie!

Initially, Gary was confused at the form in which the genie took ... but then he realised that he himself was a troll and that he was just caressing a blue, tattered spoon - just a normal night in West Boggins.

The Koala-genie cackled and coughed due to a mixture of his stone-cold heart and his incredibly asthmatic lungs (the smoke certainly did him no good). "I shall grant thee just one wish!", declared the fury-filled furry critter. However, just as Gary was about to make his desires come true, in burst Brad to stop him!

Brad and Gary roughed it out - what was Brad thinking!? Trolls are ten-times stronger than a regular human, let alone thin and delightful Brad. Gary was on top of Brad and raised his hand in what would be his finishing strike, "I should have done this a long time ago!" he laughed as he went in for the blow.

"Not so fast!" screamed Alison Smith who had been using her super-vampire hearing to listen in on what was going on. She proceeded to knock Gary to one side, leaving him dazed and confused. Brad was shocked and wanted answers. Alison explained it all to him, and explained that she didn't tell him sooner due to her cowardliness.

Everything turned out well; Alison and Brad walked off into the distance together, happy to begin the rest of their lives together as an interspecies couple...

However, they forgot about the Koala-genie and Gary. Gary crawled over to mystic marsupial and smiled, baring his sharp, troll teeth... he had dark thoughts on his mind...

There you go, rushed because I have to go to school right now! Sorry about the length!

lawrawrrr
15-06-2012, 09:21 PM
There's a loving new girl in West Boggins and she has everybody talking. Stunningly slender and devastatingly hot, all the boys want her. However, Alison Smith has a secret - she's a cowardly vampire.


Brad Parkes is a delightful, thin boy who enjoys socialising. He becomes fascinated by Alison who can stop cars with her bare hands. He doesn't understand why she's so standoffish.


His bestfriend, a smart troll called Gary, helps Brad begin to piece together the puzzle. Together, they discover the ultimate weapon - the blue, tattered spoon...




Brad couldn't believe his eyes. The 3 of them; Alison, Gary and himself were standing in the middle of the woods in a clearing illuminated by the full moon. Alison had turned ghostly white and her fangs had come through. Brad was half terrified, half amazed, and couldn't take his eyes off her. Gary couldn't care less, however, and was next to the couple, eating an orange whole. Suddenly, they heard a ferocious growl in the distance. All around them, the trees stood tall, silhouetted against the moon. It looked like they were looming ahead, the wind playing the part of their war-cry.

All 3 huddled in a tight circle, Alison in the middle silently sobbing for her life. Out of nowhere, leaves started to rustle and soon enough, a creature burst into the clearing they were hiding in. As their eyes adjusted to the dark conditions, Brad looked towards the monster and exclaimed "It's a rabid koala!"

The koala, mutated by the nearby nuclear energy waste to be 12 foot tall, lumbered towards the cowering pile of fleshy dinner and gave them a once over. Looking around for a suitable weapon, he was disappointed, instead ripping a tree out by it's roots. Alison screamed and began to cry even harder, while Brad desperately searched for something they could use as a club or shield of some sort, while the koala stalked him around the clearing.

Gary meanwhile, was doing his typical troll thing, and coughing up the remnants of his orange. First came the pith, then bits of the peel. Gary noticed that the koala had given up his chase to focus on the regurgitated food at this point, and was coming towards him. It didn't trample him, though, instead stopping just short and bending down to pick through the orange.

Brad jerked his head up and saw what the koala was doing. He shouted out to a cowering Gary, "It's the orange peel"! Gary kept regurgitating more and more orange peel, until the koala finally caught on. He bent down further and slowly lowered his mouth over Gary, the sharp canines clenching together, piercing Gary's skull in two, not even allowing him enough time to scream or beg for mercy. Alison and Brad were now huddling together, yet both had stopped crying. They had resigned themselves to their fate. The koala turned around and started to pace towards the trembling couple, steps echoing through the entire forest.

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