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Yupt
24-12-2013, 11:52 PM
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Yay! A Christmas themed short story competition! Just what everyone wants. For this competition, write a short story including all of the below details, use as many characters as you wish.

You must include:
Christmas
Santa
Rudolph
Mistletoe
Snow

Prize: 1 month VIP + 15 rep
Click here (http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=791966&p=8059610#post8059610) for more information about prizes

IzzyUhh
26-12-2013, 02:59 PM
It was the night before christmas. Christmas eve as we call it. Santa was delivering the presents, whilst we we're all asleep. A few drops of rain, Soon turn't to snow. Santa squeezed down the chimney, to deliver some presents to susie who asked for a pink bike. Susie's parents had placed mistletoe around the house. How cute. There was a creak of the stairs as santa put the presentnext to the tree. He shook, He panicked, He stressed, It was manic.

Rudolph, On top of the roof with the other reindeer, Was worrying.
Santa hadn't come back yet. He heard a SMASH of the tree tipping over and a scream of two shocked parents. A bark of a dog & a cry of a small child.
What had santa done?

Reality
26-12-2013, 05:43 PM
T'was the night before... well we all know how that goes!
On with the story.
Santa was with the elves getting ready to go to the Coco Shack for a well deserved coco and milk, after delivering all of them presents to all the good boys and girls. Meanwhile, Rudolph decided to stay at the workshop with Mrs. Claus what could they possibly be doing? Not going to the Coco Shack like they annually do after all their hard work (not that Mrs. Claus did anything, she was just the pretty face). The snow was falling heavier than ever now, Santa and the elves were about to head back to the workshop to get ready for 2014 and prepare all of the toys but, the snow had conveniently snowed them in (how ironic!)!
Mrs. Claus and Rudolph were still at the workshop; they didn't seem to notice the snow falling and hadn't even realized Santa and the elves hadn't returned yet!
While Santa was worrying what to do and how to make the 20 minute walk home in the treacherous snow, all the elves carried on how they were and played all their mischievous little games and pranks on Santa! Rudolph on the other hand was having an blast, literally a blast, on Santa's new sleigh. Whizzing at over 60 mp/h on Santa's sleigh-bob 2000. However Mrs. Claus was doing something no one would of imagined her of all people in Lapland to be doing, she was kissing a elf!! How could she be kissing an elf underneath the mistletoe! How could she betray Santa?! Her explanation was simple, she just wasn't feeling loved by him and thought the devilish and handsome elf would do a better job than Santa.
Rudolph was still flying faster than ever and notice Santa and the elf stuck in the Coco Shack, as we all know Rudolph is very helpful, and helped Santa and the elves back to the workshop, but the snow nearly misguided Rudolph, but Rudolph got them all home safely!
When they got back to the workshop, they found Mrs. Claus and the elf kissing underneath the mistletoe, Santa walked in with a look of disbelief and horror... (What happened next, no one knows) The End

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