Yupt
14-01-2015, 02:12 AM
http://Habbox.com/text/habbo_beta_small/what+a%20mistake
So, even though it's content week and Competitions are a community department, we thought we'd get involved with two competition. The other of which can be found by clicking here (http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=819297).
This competition addresses the Article writing at Habbox, it's a tough job proof reading everything and now you're going to get a little taste of that, below is part of an actual habbox.com article, written and released recently. However, i've edited it slightly and put in a few silly mistakes. For this competition look at the article extract below and see if you can find all of the mistakes that I have added. But here's the hard bit - i'm not going to tell you how many mistakes there are. Look for grammar, spelling and duplicates.
A day in the life of a Graphics designer!
The first place I look to when I come onto the forum is my notifications. This is because I usually have have some replies to graphics I previously posting. I am always eager to read. These because I will normaly have received an opinion on the graphic from Drew and sometimes other staff. I am always looking to improve so any constructive criticism is always welcome and I love seeing what they all think! I love that any graphics you post get acknowledged and you are you are always able to improve them with the ideas other staff have.
Resently, as you may know, the lottery has just been reintroduced. This meant that there was a task for a new lottery banner! The theme for the banner was anything that resembled wealth, andChris suggested perhapse having a big pile of Habbo coins. We were also given a ink to the old lottery banner for referrence. I started by looking through the newsheaders on the Habborator archive for ideas on what to have in the background. I found one with what looked like a game show presenter on and it was perfect because it looked like she was announcing the lottery winner!
PM your answers to Yupt by clicking here (http://www.habboxforum.com/private.php?do=newpm&u=69157).
The most correct reponses will win, if it is a draw a random number generator will decide the overall winner.
Prize: 2 weeks VIP, 15 rep + 2 points
Click here (http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=812970&p=8255961#post8255961) for more information about prizes
So, even though it's content week and Competitions are a community department, we thought we'd get involved with two competition. The other of which can be found by clicking here (http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=819297).
This competition addresses the Article writing at Habbox, it's a tough job proof reading everything and now you're going to get a little taste of that, below is part of an actual habbox.com article, written and released recently. However, i've edited it slightly and put in a few silly mistakes. For this competition look at the article extract below and see if you can find all of the mistakes that I have added. But here's the hard bit - i'm not going to tell you how many mistakes there are. Look for grammar, spelling and duplicates.
A day in the life of a Graphics designer!
The first place I look to when I come onto the forum is my notifications. This is because I usually have have some replies to graphics I previously posting. I am always eager to read. These because I will normaly have received an opinion on the graphic from Drew and sometimes other staff. I am always looking to improve so any constructive criticism is always welcome and I love seeing what they all think! I love that any graphics you post get acknowledged and you are you are always able to improve them with the ideas other staff have.
Resently, as you may know, the lottery has just been reintroduced. This meant that there was a task for a new lottery banner! The theme for the banner was anything that resembled wealth, andChris suggested perhapse having a big pile of Habbo coins. We were also given a ink to the old lottery banner for referrence. I started by looking through the newsheaders on the Habborator archive for ideas on what to have in the background. I found one with what looked like a game show presenter on and it was perfect because it looked like she was announcing the lottery winner!
PM your answers to Yupt by clicking here (http://www.habboxforum.com/private.php?do=newpm&u=69157).
The most correct reponses will win, if it is a draw a random number generator will decide the overall winner.
Prize: 2 weeks VIP, 15 rep + 2 points
Click here (http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=812970&p=8255961#post8255961) for more information about prizes