Songwriters - Post Your Lyrics Here

[♥ Punx ♥]

I love reading other peopls songs (cuz I am bad at writing my own), so if it's ok with you guys I want you to post your best song lyrics.

[Jõnathan]

Errr... I dunno about posting my best lyrics, but I'll post a song I made. It's called 'Maybe You'll Die Soon (We Hope Not)'

You're in an unhealthy state (what matters is that you're not irate),
You're in a coma (why didn't you hit that homer?),
And if you go to the grave (we'd say…)

IT'S YOU, always forever, for me, and for you, and if you don't know why, then I hope you don't die- and if you go to the great place in the sky, we won't forget you- (and that's a promise!)

We know you're ill (You been off work months now),
But we have you in our hearts (It's like an Industrial Revolution in you),
Revolution in you, revolution in me, revolution in you, revolution in ME!

(Chorusx2)

Remember, we love you forever.
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I don't think it's that good, but it's got some MCR-style parts in it. Do you agree?

[*anti-flag*]

why read, you can listen!
http://myspace.com/thesourcerock

bigger than broccoli sung and written by moi

[♥ Punx ♥]

That song reminds me of my daddy

[beth]

My lyrics seriously are ew but I wrote one a while back uhm ;

Losing Grip - Bethie.



Blood stains in the bathroom,
Handprints on the glass,
Bruises in my heart,
From all the lovers in the past.
Nothing takes my interest,
Nothing soothes my pain,
Past Lovers who haunt me ,
Over and over again.

Drown yourself in my tears,
Scare yourself with my fears,
Take away this pain ,
That hurts me time and again.
Dont turn away from me ,
Dont let me live undecidedly.
Im Losing Grip,
And Falling too fast.

I watch your tears stream down your face,
I dont want to make you smile,
For all the pain you put me through,
You should suffer for a while.
I remember when we used to be friends,
--- our friendship now,
I hate you so so --- much,
But still I wonder how.

Drown yourself in my tears,
Scare yourself with my fears,
Take away this pain ,
That hurts me time and again.
Dont turn away from me ,
Dont let me live undecidedly.
Im Losing Grip,
And Falling too fast.

Dont leave me here,
Dont leave me here,
Dont leave me here,
I Just cant stay,
Dont leave me here
Dont leave me here
Dont leave me here
Take this pain away


I wrote that back in uhm January, its rather bad but yes.

[Pelfe]

BETHIE! Ther awesome! And broccoli guy sweet voice dude ;D

Ra Ra x

[MsTanya]

Lmao this is the first song me and my friend wrote when we were 11

When darkness decends,
And blackness unfolds,
When life don't feel like living,
When all that seems possible is death.

Remember me,
Remember me from your dark life
Remember the one who loved you
The one that you left, hurt and destroyed.

I'll be here,
I'll be here when till the end of the world,
I'll be here when I'm dying my slow, painful death.
I'll still be here after everything

Remember me,
Remember me from your dark life
Remember the one who loved you
The one that you left, hurt and destroyed.

I never wanted it to end,
You did all the decisions,
I never wanted it to be like this,
You could never realise.

I tried getting through to you,
Tried to see,
See where you were coming from,
See what you meant to me.

Remember me,
Remember me from your dark life
Remember the one who loved you
The one that you left, hurt and destroyed.

I'll stay here.
I'll wait.
For the day when you realise.
Just what I meant

I'll be alive
When you come back
I'll be stronger and harder
But still loving you

So come back soon.
And remember me.
So come back soon.
To the person you left, hurt and destroyed.

[CSGG_Rawks]

I wrote a song last year called "Jump" (no, not the Van Halen song :p). The lyrics were rubbish, but the riff rawked. The plan was, that we had 1 verse and about 5 minutes of guitar solo.

I managed it too!

[Cyvox]

Well as im in an Indie band we wrote the riff and hoped we could get the lyrics whilst playing and also whilst being doped up on anything we had

[Clo]

HAHA I JUST HAD TO PUT THIS SONG IN SOMEWHERE! IT'S A SONG ME AND MY FRIEND MADE UP WHEN WE WAS IN YEAR 4, LMAO X'] BAHAH.

Baby, you know I want you.
I will never let, you down.

'Cause i've been thinking about you,
every day after day,
i've been thinking about you
every day after day..
Baby open your heart and show me your love tonight,
'cause I want your love tonight..

When I looked at you,
and I saw your face,
A sparkle in your eyes,
Told me that, you are the one for me..
OH YEAH.

-Chorus-

OHH YES, DID YOU LIKE IT? PMSL. NO SERIOUSLY I LOVED IT AT THE TIME. PLUS WE DID SING IT OTHER THAN WRITE IT.