Soldier

[PaintYourTarget]

Ok, some serious CC needed, so shoot and I'll see what I can do.
(Excuse the pun =D)

[=Jen=]

Well...
The gun looks like a needle, try making in thicker. But everything else is great!
♥

[PaintYourTarget]

Yeah, I'll get around to fixing that.

[Ekalb]

I changed it a bit because it was nice - for CC only of course I added some shading to the clothes.
As the helmet itself is shaded that certain way I decided to continue it to the rim around it. I shortened the end of the gun, I changed the pants, and continued the dithering through the whole piece. I also recoloured it for some reason.
So you can use what I did there to further develop your soldier if you want to. Some of the things I did may not be to correct what you did but simply because I liked to do that so don't think as though yours is all wrong and everything i did is completely correct.
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[ItsDave]

Lol, "Everything I did was corect, yours was wrong". Charming. Lol, jk. Yeah, I do prefer Cptns one, but as this is your thread,an 8/10

[Pappapiero]

2nd post is 10/10

[PaintYourTarget]

2nd post is 10/10

Well, to be honest dude, you're not rating that.
I asked for CC on mine, not on Blake's (who is perhaps one of the only people on the forum to actually help and talk it through on msn).

[Porosity]

your version looks good :0 8/10

gun looks kinda weird :p

[Ekalb]

Okay everyone, keep in mind
THE THREAD IS ABOUT MRPRESIDENT'S SOLDIER. NOT MINE. GOT IT? CAPS ARE EFFECTIVE.
My changes were simply for CC so MrPresident could see what may be improved.
Please keep all comments about the threadstarter and not my post.


Sorry for stealing your thread Lee, I'll try to give it back.