My english coursework - Origional Writing - United 93

[Samishlol]

i think it's good.

[Markness.]

Great i enjoyed reading it
pls finish it i wanna know whats gonna happen

[Asher]

I'd probably grade it around the C mark.

I dunno, at times it seems weak, and some of your sentences don't flow too nicely at points. As it's based on the tragedy
of 9/11, I'd expect a more striking/dramatic (whatever you want to call it) tone, especially towards the climax.

[Fez]

Good work

Well done

[Qamp]

Its cool tbh ;]

[ItsDave]

James James James James James James James James James James James James James James James James James James James James James James James James James James James... Ive done my piece of coursework on this.... Its 7 PAGES! LOLOLOL

[Smits]

Thanks mate i needed something like that.

[Ailerons]

Thoroughly enjoyed reading it, although there are some mistakes which mostly people have pointed out.

I done my coursework (which I'll have to redo due to some idiotic cover teacher), on something similar. Well, the main character was the pilot and there was an engine failure, but you get the drift.

[iTechnical]

"this is not a related incident"
"we will suffer the same fate"

o.O

9/10

[klicha]

HIYA WELL DONE
i was just wondring if u have done any other 9/11
related coursework > ?
is not liike i would copy anything but truly is very intersting,

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