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Thread: Cupid (Poem)

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    Default Cupid (Poem)

    I passed this around on V-day just because it suited. Its not a true story, i just used my name because i was lacking ideas.

    November 4th, 2004. "Cupid" by Danny

    "Hair of the color black floating with the wind
    Forgive me god, i think i just sinned
    Self esteem too low to go and earn her trust
    Shes just a beautiful stranger who i lust

    Backpack draped over her left arm
    I follow her, but i dont mean no harm
    Occupying my mind as i daze off
    Into my own world, she looks so soft

    So carefree and innocent, not a bother in the world
    Walking stride for stride like a picture on a mural
    Then the unthinkable happens, i bump into her and panic
    My thoughts switch course, "What to say"?, so frantic

    "Im sorry, i wasnt paying attention, my name is Dan"
    I say in a quiet tone, thinking i should have just ran
    She turns around and smiles, her bright blue eyes gleaming
    We stared at each other, and i could have swore i was dreaming

    My throat gets dry, and i struggle to think
    "This is kind of awkward, but would you happen to have a drink?"
    "No, sorry. I just came out for a short walk. I do it for fun."
    "Well, if you have a few minutes, care to go have one?"

    This is a story of cupid in action
    As they walked towards the coffee shop with no negative reaction
    The average joe with the girl of his dreams
    Almost impossible it usually would seem

    But 36 months later the bells are ringing
    As the chapel is full, the orchestra is singing
    A simple lust turned into a lifelong marriage
    With both taking turns pushing the baby carriage

    Follow your dreams and dont hold back
    Never stop and consider what you lack
    Nothing is out of the question, just follow the path
    It is possible, just do the math

    And when in doubt just read this story
    About this couple named Dan and Laurie
    Just let your fears drift away
    Dont wait until tomorrow, it could happen today."

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    Wow, your great at writing poems
    Well done mate.

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    thats amazing dude!

    http://www.stupidian.com
    (contains mild swearing)

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    Excellent,

    I'm Shocked Great Poem
    I want to be a Penguin,Hippo,Llama Real Boy!


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    That is amazing man, well done

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    That is beautiful!

    Well Done!
    An eye for an eye and the whole world goes blind!

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