(B) Peter Pan: Improvement?

[Blissa]

I have done some work on my Peter Pan alteration, and I'll let you decide wether or not it's an improvement. I've added some twinkle around him to make him look like he's been given Magic dust by Tinkerbell, and I got rid of his acne face! lol. I might make a scene, not sure yet.. So, rates? Feel free to use it as your avatar if you like it that much.

[Kiba.]

Okay... That's deinately a 10/10.

Congrats, I think it's perfect, and It looks alot more childish than the last one.
It also has that Peter Pan feeling

I'd +rep you, But I need to spread I think

[Earthquake]

OMG, That is fantastic! The shading really works, Maybe work on the hair, Like add a little hat? I don't know, Its a 9.9/10 From me! Keep up the fantastic work! Honestly, Didn't know you was so good !

[Smores]

Hey that's really cute! I love the way you put sparkles around Peter so it would seem more magic-ish (If that's a word, haha) So, I rate it a 9.5/10! Plus a rep ^_^ But there's one think I'm wondering about.. that little lump in the middle of his pants.. What is it? Ah well, nevermind, great alt!

[Blissa]

Lol smores! That's not meant to be a lump, it's supposed to be part of his top, the way it's torn.

[Hiro]

A lot better, but still the shading still has a problem with me :S
9/10