new freestyle

[GoldSolid]

hey if you're into rap music check out my new freestyle apologies for the quiet voice, the guy who edited the video made the beat too loud when he was putting it over the vid, but anyway if you click like on it and lemme know you did ill +9 rep you thanks : )
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HTYNTM0OwoM

[J0SH]

Your lyrics are decent, but you need to be original and not spit about guns murder etc etc like everybody else. Tell the editor he's an idiot for putting the beat louder than you lol

[Judas]

Your lyrics are decent, but you need to be original and not spit about guns murder etc etc like everybody else. Tell the editor he's an idiot for putting the beat louder than you lol

I agree, that whole violent shtick in rap music is getting beyond tired and boring now, and I can't see the purpose in it to be honest. To me, it's pathetic. Just my opinion. But you seem like a nice and humble guy so I don't know why you'd want to talk about those kind of things in your music. You have talent and you're really good, but I think a bit of a different direction in terms of subject matter wouldn't go a miss. But I can't enjoy you when you're talking about how 'ard you are and how much you're gonna **** everybody up

Didn't mean for this to come across rude btw, I like you, just not the lyrical content