Ice Cream Van

[dbgtz]

[SackRace]

not bad, not a fan of the back wheel

[dbgtz]

Yeah there's lots I omitted during it. Got a bit lazy in the end

[Hannah]

It's pretty cool - not too sure on the outline of the ice cream though. Looks as though you forgot to finish it >.<

[Kyle]

Sadly the back wheel skews the whole thing downwards at the back visually. If you'd have given yourself a larger area to work with you might have been able to add a little more depth to the inside of the van but as it stands there's not enough room for a proper look through the shutter and the floor is quite high. I assume you tried the icecream at the back with a fully black outline but didn't like it; the half and half doesn't really work either - try something a bit darker maybe?

ALSO make your own wheels you scam. Cute numberplate

[dbgtz]

It's pretty cool - not too sure on the outline of the ice cream though. Looks as though you forgot to finish it >.<

Sadly the back wheel skews the whole thing downwards at the back visually. If you'd have given yourself a larger area to work with you might have been able to add a little more depth to the inside of the van but as it stands there's not enough room for a proper look through the shutter and the floor is quite high. I assume you tried the icecream at the back with a fully black outline but didn't like it; the half and half doesn't really work either - try something a bit darker maybe?

ALSO make your own wheels you scam. Cute numberplate

Regarding the outline, it's meant to be directly attached to the van and has depth, rather than being a "2d" image.

Tbh I just got really bored and wanted it done lmao. Thanks for feedback.

[abitoflauren]

The only things that look dodgy are the back wheel and the ice cream why don't you make the outline of the icecream like a whitey gray colour so it doesn't stand out too much

[dbgtz]

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[Johannes]

I like it, good job! I'd never be able to make something like that.