Teenage Lives

[Mrs.McCall]

Yes, it's back.

Click the spoiler for episode one part one of Teenage Lives Series 5!

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Previously on Teenage Lives:

Danny was shot by Serena who says it was completely by accident. When visiting him in hospital, Serena herself was shot and both were fighting for their lives. But, as they recovered, a detective walked in and revealed somebody had come forward for shooting both Danny and Serena...

# We open with Danny bursting through his door with another guy, they both fall on the bed. Cut to later on, both lie in the bed #

Guy: Wow, that was hot

Danny: Yes

Guy: Was it good for you?

Danny: I’ve had better

Guy: Huh?

Danny: You can go now

Guy: You’re kicking me out?!

Danny: Are you an idiot or something, get the hell out of my room!

Guy: Christ, you jerk

# The guy steps out and gets dressed. He storms out the flat, Danny slams backwards on the bed and sighs. The phone rings #

Danny: Hello?

Serena: Danny! Hi, hope it’s not too late. I forget the time difference

Danny: No, it’s fine. I was awake anyway. What’s up?

Serena: I was just checking in to see how you are, what you’ve been up to

Girl’s Voice: Come on! There’s a queue here.

Danny: Who was that?

Serena: Oh, I’m in Starbucks, I best go

Danny: Are you ok? You sound weird...

Serena: No, i’m fine. Any luck finding Alexis?

Danny: No

Serena: Ok, love you, bye

Danny: Love you too

# Danny hangs up. We cut to a worried looking Serena. She turns around and we realise she’s in a prison #

Police Guard: Come on, you get one phone call. You’ve had it

Serena: I want my lawyer!

# A psychiatrists’ office. Danny is on the couch #

Psychiatrist: So, have you made any progress?

Danny: Forming attachments? No. Infact, I slept with a perfectly nice guy last night and ordered him out of my room

Psychiatrist: And how did that feel?

Danny: How do you think? I was frustrated. I am sick of being this freak

Psychiatrist: We’ve discussed this, you’re not a freak. You’ve been through a lot in your life. You’ve lost everyone you loved. You’ve been beaten, bruised and shot

Danny: Can we not talk about the shooting?

Psychiatrist: Why?

Danny: Because I don’t want to drag all that up, I have a scar, the scar is more than enough

Psychiatrist: Scars are more than psychical Danny

Danny: Look, Sarah has been put away for what she did. My biggest problem here is that fact that I’m paying good money for you not to do anything. I need you to fix me. What kind of person can’t love?

Psychiatrist: You’re more than capable of loving, Danny

Danny: I used to be and now, nobody can get close

Psychiatrist: Those visions you had when you were shot. Even though everyone said they were disappointed you were still loved. Don’t you see? Those visions weren’t real, Danny, it was a manifestation of your true feelings that even though you’ve lost people and gone down the wrong path people can still love you. It was your sub conscious trying to tell you not to give up.

Danny: I gave up when Nate died

Psychiatrist: For a guy who was the love of your life, you don’t really talk about him much

Danny: Nothing to tell

Psychiatrist: You told me you got together under unfortunate circumstances, what did you mean?

Danny: Why do you rake everything up all the time?

Psychiatrist: It’s my job. Take me back to when you and him fell in love

# Flashback. High school. We see Stacy, Alexis, Nate, Danny and Michaela all sat around one table, Nate and Stacy kiss. Danny looks at them, jealously #

Alexis: So, what’s happening tonight?

Michaela: We’ve got loads of studying to do

Stacy: Oh please, who needs revision when you could do something a lot more fun

# Stacy runs her hand up Nate’s leg, he laughs #

Danny: You think pretending he can satisfy you is a good night?

# Everyone laughs, Danny laughs and stares at Nate who stares back #

Nate: Least I can get laid my friend

Alexis: Come on, we best get going

# Stacy kisses Nate #

Stacy: Enjoy free period losers

# The bell rings and everyone clears the common room. Danny and Nate are left alone #

Nate: Dude, are we the only ones left with free period?

Danny: No, it’s just people would rather study in the library

Nate: Ah right, fancy a walk?

Danny: Yeah sure

# Danny and Nate get up. Cut to the Village #

Nate: So I ran to hear what all the commotion was, and Rick had tried shaving and cut all his face!

# Danny and Nate laugh #

Danny: Poor kid

Nate: Yeah, he’s cool though

Danny: It’s weird, I’ve known you for so long and I barely know anything about you

Nate: You’re not going all touchy-feely are you?

Danny: Please, that’s so...

Nate: Gay?

Danny: Ha, yeah

# There is an awkward silence #

Nate: Mind if we nip back to mine, I had PE before and the BO is overwhelming me

Danny: Nah it’s fine, why didn’t you use the showers at School?

Nate: Showering with a bunch of guys, not my thing

Danny: Ah, gotcha

# They enter Nate’s house #

Nate: Hello? Mum? Dad? Hmm, looks like we’re on our own, come on

# They go upstairs and into Nate’s bedroom #

Nate: I won’t be long

# Nate goes into his bathroom. Danny leans forward and notices Nate getting undressed, he leans back as the shower is turned on #

Danny: So, you and Stacy are serious now huh?

Nate: Yeah, I guess

Danny: You don’t sound too sure

Nate: Ah, you know what’s its like, they always want it more serious

Danny: Yeah, I wouldn’t really

Nate: I thought you and Alexis had something going on?

Danny: Nah, I don’t think there is anything there to be honest. I love her as a friend but... she’s not my type

# The shower is turned off #

Danny: That was quick

Nate: Only girls take ages in the shower

# Nate steps out in just a towel, his skin is glistening wet. Danny stares, mouth agape #

Nate: You want a picture?

Danny: Huh, oh, sorry... world of my own

# Nate walks towards his wardrobe but trips, falling on Danny #

Nate: Sorry

Danny: That's OK

Nate: I tripped

Danny: I know

# They stare at each other, silently #

Nate: I’ve never noticed your eyes before

# Nate leans in closer #

Danny: They’ve always been there...

Nate: Funny

Danny: Are you OK?

Nate: I will be

# Nate leans in and kisses Danny. Nate pulls back #

Nate: Oh man, I don’t...

Danny: Shut up

# Danny pulls Nate back in and they kiss passionately, Danny rolls him over. Later, Danny and Nate lie silently in each other’s arms. Nate’s phone rings, he gets it from his trousers #

Nate: Hello? Uh, Stacy, hey, I’m at my place. NO, don’t come round... you don’t need to, i’m just heading back.
Danny? Nope, not seen him. He missed Geography? Maybe he’s ill? Ok, love you too, bye

Danny: Wow... so... you’re going?

Nate: Yep, and so are you

Danny: What?!

Nate: You’re going to forget this ever happened

Danny: How, I...

Nate: Just get over it

Danny: Nate...

Nate: And if you tell anyone I swear to god I’ll kill you

Danny: Nate!

Nate: You can go now

Danny: Christ, you jerk!

# Danny grabs his clothes and storms out #

#END... Part 2 soon #

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[Immenseman]

oooooh nate and danny who would've thought it.

they have so much drama in their lives, all of them.

good writing as always, ugly x

[Mrs.McCall]

Haha thanks.

[flatface]

Lol! waits for part two

Good work!

[Mrs.McCall]

Thanks.

I thought it might be nice to see how Danny and Nate got together before I launch into crazy storylines.

[dirrty]

its all good. glad ur doing em again as i enjoyed the previous ones. at one point i thought it was turning into some erotic story aha

[Mrs.McCall]

its all good. glad ur doing em again as i enjoyed the previous ones. at one point i thought it was turning into some erotic story aha

Thanks. And I am glad i'm doing them again too... missed writing it.

And yeah, I had to cut bits out. Realised I was writing an adult movie by accident.

[jackass]

MORE SEX SCENES PLEASE

But yeah lol, it's pretty good. Nice one!

[Immenseman]

Just don't make the story lines too unrealistic, I need to be able to relate to what's happening, to an extent.

[dogboy123]

Owoh, tht was good I actually really enjoyed it!