Would you jump of a cliff, for your deepest love?
Or would you even kill yourself, so you can watch from up above?
Would you ever say you love them if it wasnt really there?
Just because you want to show them how much you really care?
Would you ever say goodbye if you could not go on?
Or would you stand up tall, and continue being strong?
Would you climb the steapest hill just to be alone?
When in your heart, you know that with them you feel at home.
Would you ever cry a tear just to show you know?
But deep inside your love for them continues to grow?
Would you ever be with them untill the end of time?
Or leave them for someone else then leave your true love behined.
Would you ever love someone and kiss someone goodnight?
Be the one to hold them when you turn of the light?
Would you want to watch that person from up above?
If you would die for that person, you really are in love
Its sooooooo bad, whatya think?
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Thread: Would you? **+**Poem**_**
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Would you? **+**Poem**_**
These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There’s just too much that time cannot erase
When you cried I’d wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I’d fight away all of your fears
I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have...all of me
[......Evanescence - My Immortal......]
Someone... Somewhere... Is thinking of you right now......
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Did you just call that bad?
I think its absoloutely great, i have to say you have a good talent for poems... 10/10!!!ѕтσρ αиιмαℓ ¢яυєℓту
тєѕт му ραтιєи¢є.. gσ σи.. ι ∂αяє уσυ!
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Thanks, but im still not totaly pleased with it!
These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There’s just too much that time cannot erase
When you cried I’d wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I’d fight away all of your fears
I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have...all of me
[......Evanescence - My Immortal......]
Someone... Somewhere... Is thinking of you right now......
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Nice poem
However, there are a few areas which you could improve on though. But other then that, good poem, well done 
9/10
A smile is a curve that sets everything straight
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Beautiful... Rep added. 9/10
An eye for an eye and the whole world goes blind!
To say you are part of the majority makes you one of the minority.
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