I make songs?

[RedStratocas]

Yeah, I decided [this weekend] to stop simply listening to the same music over and over again and actually contribute. So I made a song. I wrote and recorded it all on the weekend. There's no lyrics yet, thus it's untitled on my myspace page, but right now Im thinking "Beautiful Things (Don't Last)" sounds pretty good. Its only 2:40, give it a listen if you want, I wont blame you if you dont since there's no singing yet. Oh, and I used a drum machine because I dont play drums.

Im just looking for opinions, be honest. (BEST LISTENED TO WITH HEADPHONES)

http://www.myspace.com/jonnypark2

PS- The second song 'Hardware' was just me messing around with the drum machine a few weeks back. It took me about an hour too make, and I put no thought into it whatsoever.

[Smurtz]

I actually like it, It's pretty good. What make/years your guitar?

[RedStratocas]

I actually like it, It's pretty good. What make/years your guitar?

Mexican Stratocaster, 2003 (I think)

[velvet]

Wow, I really like that. +rep :]