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The hair is a bit OTT + messed up on the fringe,
Apart from that, It's amazing!
Welldone!
OTT? yeah, i get the part about the fringe.
think you can fix it?
thanks alot ^^
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It looks damn well. The hair could be a little bit smoother
8/10 +rep
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The black outline is very jagged and could probably use a few pixels being moved about to make it smother, perhaps a tad of shading/AA to make the transition from colour to black not so harsh and obvious.
The boots need to look slightly more curved and the trousers lightened up to make the shading and leg easier to see.
Well done on the pose, but Leela's curvy and your Habbo is blocky. Perhaps look into incorporating that into your next version?
What they said. OTT means over the top. Improve the hair and that'll be one of the best alterations I've seenThe black outline is very jagged and could probably use a few pixels being moved about to make it smother, perhaps a tad of shading/AA to make the transition from colour to black not so harsh and obvious.
The boots need to look slightly more curved and the trousers lightened up to make the shading and leg easier to see.
Well done on the pose, but Leela's curvy and your Habbo is blocky. Perhaps look into incorporating that into your next version?all dayin a long time.
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Mmk, in the updated version I will try to:
Curve off the waist and legs,
Fix the Hair Fringe
Make the pants a dark, dark grey, NOT BLACK,
Round the boots off to give it a more realistic style
Smoothen the arm line
Last edited by Paragram; 05-10-2008 at 01:15 AM.
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Revised alt with all of the suggestions taken in hand:
You'll notice the black in the pants is lighter, the waist is slim and goes to bigger to fit the boots, her belly is farther towards the middle, the <<<< arm was smoothened, and the fringe on the hair was fixed.
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